Monday, March 11, 2024

First Draft Feedback

 After our visitation with our teacher, we got all the feedback about our film after me, and my team watched it with her. She mentioned how the name of our film had to be changed, and how we had to better introduce characters the protagonist was engaging with. We also needed to add voiceovers for better connections and also show scenes with the protagonist and her boyfriend. Improve acting and show the protagonist expressing better emotion, and add in when a new day transitions in. We also had to enhance our exposition. Change the name of our film and add credits to the end, insert pauses in the movie every now and then. And to improve our volume, refill certain shots and edit them better. 





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